Thursday, August 22, 2013

Carpe Diem Haiku Tan Renga „Cricket Silence“


cricket silence
between scraping sounds
autumn begins                                   (Jane Reichhold)

coloured foliage falling
each bearing written wishes




a light rain leaves damp the leaves
night will start with wafts of mists

harvest fires are burning
reminiscing idle times


http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.de/

2 comments:

  1. Awesome Lothar you have shared three possible completions of the Tan Renga ... I like that second two-line stanza the most, that one makes the Tan renga really complete in my opinion.

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  2. Three great completions ,,, hard to choose a favorite.. but I love the messages in the leaf.

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